When I read, whether it’s a book, short story, fan fiction, etc… xxxhindi The lack of descriptive adjectives makes it like watching a movie with plain grey people on a black background. I’m not saying give us the whole world Layout, but give some description of body structure, back ground, scene etc… The lack of descriptive adjectives makes it like watching a movie with plain grey people on a black background. Not to sound like a bitch, but; Your character description is highly lacking, your grammer is terrible and your over all your use of description is next to none. I picture what I’m reading in my head, like watching a movie in my mind.
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Jessica Ryan
