5 comments«1»AnnistaysiaReport 2014-12-17 05:54:00I’ll be honest with you… Other than what I stated above; your story flows very well and it has an excellent plot. Telugu xxx When I read, whether it’s a book, short story, fan fiction, etc… There’s a reason your story has the rating it does… Not to sound like a bitch, but; Your character description is highly lacking, your grammer is terrible and your over all your use of description is next to none. I’m not saying give us the whole world Layout, but give some description of body structure, back ground, scene etc… I’m not saying give us the whole world Layout, but give some description of body structure, back ground, scene etc…
Actors:
Brianna Rose / Luke Longly
