8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-10-29 00:35:24PLEASE. XXX video . …STOP. . …WRITING!!!!!!! Take spelling!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 01:51:14This was fvckin stupid! If you write again which I don’t suggest. Try using spell check, a dictionary, and some proper grammerAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 11:03:21Shannon…go back to school. …or…are you still in school?? Give it up. …u DONT write well, there was NOTHING sexy or hot abt this story…just. …stop writing. …OR I if u insist on continuing – LEARN HOW TO WRITE BETTER & USE FUCKING SPELL/GRAMMAR CHECK!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-04 17:46:51Leave it; he’ll understand??! Please don’t continue«12» Before the first sentence the story had potential.. Take spelling!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 01:51:14This was fvckin stupid! If you write again which I don’t suggest. Please don’t continue«12» Please don’t continue«12» Wow, if your dad is fine with you having sex with Luke while you’re 14, then that’s incredibly wrong.Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-30 01:26:34Ok..
