I would love to read a new story from you that tried to show more of the characters’ influences, motivations and emotional/mental state.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-08 14:44:27Ignore the asshole who hates, this is a great story keep writting.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-08 13:23:24Again, why such hatred for the husband and a completely immoral wife? Aunty xxx This could never be real because she would find her ass getting dropped and the 10+ club getting destroyed and blown up. Or revenge of chemical castration by the husband. Interesting reasons why, make better stories. I got pretty hot reading it. I have suggestions to improve your story telling, if you’re happy with how you write, then just ignore the following. The story’s big weakness is, each thing happening in the story doesn’t follow in an interesting way. Try to get better at storytelling.«1» I have suggestions to improve
