I’m 15 and can probably write a better punctuated story than that.Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-14 14:30:30Keep it goin i wanna see if u fuck her again.Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-07 23:25:57At least learn to use full stops before you write the next episode.Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-05 21:30:48got confused with the lack of grammer its not hard to learn and use all an allAnonymous readerReport 2008-10-02 02:03:30Ok I understand it’s a sex story and they don’t have the best grammar in the world, but please make an attempt to show that you know what grammar and punctuation are… Did you every go to school? Video xxx as one poster put it, if text messaging grammar (And this is even pitiful by those standards) is the best you can come up with, please don’t bother finishing it.«12» Did you every go to school?
