You didn’t rush it, its realistic, and write more. xxxhindi I could picture this whole thing happening.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-23 02:48:49I feel that you should continue this for sure.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-23 01:43:44i take back the previous commen t. 10 out of 10. Great start to the story«12» 6 comments«12»MR.koolReport 2011-05-24 16:03:19THIS WAS A GOOD STORY! i loved it 8/10anonymous readerReport 2011-05-23 18:07:38Keep it up bro that was good!VANDENALReport 2011-05-23 12:47:16Damn! You didn’t rush it, its realistic, and write more. I could picture this whole thing happening.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-23 02:48:49I feel that you should continue this for sure.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-23 01:43:44i take back the previous commen t. 10 out of 10. 6 comments«12»MR.koolReport 2011-05-24 16:03:19THIS WAS A GOOD STORY! You didn’t rush it, its realistic, and write more.
