Most of the time you guessed wrong. Please write another.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-09 15:41:10O————————————————————————————————————————K«1» Most of these errors could be corrected by proof-reading by a literate person BEFORE submitting your work. Telugu xxx Most of the time you guessed wrong. You apparently don’t know when to use ‘its’ (possessive) and when to use ‘it’s’ (contraction of ‘it is’. Please write another.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-09 15:41:10O————————————————————————————————————————K«1» Such poor writing makes your story unenjoyable reading.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-11 02:05:09I liked it very much. ‘Its tits WHERE tightly…and THE tied…’, ‘…before the house went QUITE.’,
‘It felt hands on IT body…’, ‘Dinner is SERVICED…’, ‘…before BRING it to…’, etc, etc. You apparently don’t know when to use ‘its’ (possessive) and when to use ‘it’s’ (contraction of ‘it is’. Most of the time you guessed wrong. Most of the time you guessed wrong.
